Bell Ringer Activity:
In yesterday's class, we discussed the standards we have been working on for Quarter 1:
RL 1: "I can use evidence to support my ideas."
RL 2: "I can identify and analyze the theme of a work."
SL 5: "I can create original digital media (audio, visual) presentations to showcase and enhance my ideas."
For today's bell ringer activity, demonstrate your proficiency for RL 1, "I can use evidence to support my ideas," by
1) describing the bread, meat, bread, and condiments of a sandwich, and
2) building a "citation sandwich" on a quote from your current reading materials. For help with in-text citations, turn to pages 54-56 of the Eighth Edition of The MLA Handbook.
The top bread is the info leading up to the quote
ReplyDeleteMeet is the stuff were the quote stuff is
The bottom bread is The citation
1.
DeleteBread: Introduction to quote
Meat: "Quote"
Bread: Page number
Condiments: Explaining quote (implicit & explicit)
2. In the book Fatal Forecast by Michael J. Tougias he writes, "Ernie's pay depended on the catch, and his cut of the boat's profits was slightly lower than those of the more senior men. When the catch was poor, all the crew suffered", (6). Michael is saying that Ernie, even though he is the oldest of the crew, has the least experience on the boat.
So original, I'm so proud of you
DeleteThe first pierce of bread is the intro to the quote, the meat is the quote surrounded by quotes, the second pierce of bread is the citation, and then there is the condiments which is the explanation to the quote. According to Henrik Ibsen, "No, not only what one needs but heaps and heaps of money"(7). When Nora is talking about money she is being really greedy, all she cares about it money, she's so happy that they have a lot of money.
ReplyDelete1) The bread is the introduction to the quote. The meat is the quote. The next piece of bread is the citation. The condiments describe the quote and give it more "flavor."
ReplyDelete2) In Henrik Ibsen's play, A Doll's House, the character Nora comes home excited and happy that she could spend money on her friends and family for Christmas this year. Nora says, "Yes, Torvald, we may be a wee bit more reckless now, mayn't we? Just a tiny wee bit! You are going to have a big salary and earn lots and lots of money" (2). Nora is saying that since Torvald is getting more money she can spend a little bit more. Nora wants to get more gifts and for her friends and family with this extra money.
The bread is like the intro to the quote and the citation, the meat is the actual quote, and the condiments is what something says, and what something implies. According to Michael J. Tougias, "Georges Bank is dangerous". (Prologue XII)
ReplyDeletebread:intro to quote , meat: "quote", bread: (#), condiments: explaining the quote.
ReplyDeleteIn the story Fatal Forecast written by Michael J. Tougias, he writes, "When Ernie joined the crew of the Fair Wind, he bonded quickly with his crew mates because in many ways they were a lot like him: tough, independent, and willing to try new adventures"
(11). Michael J. Tougias explains how they crew are all alike in the best ways. People need to be tough out to sea because if not it you won't do very well.
1.
ReplyDeleteBread: Introduction to quote
Meat: "Quote"
Bread: Page number
Condiments: Explaining quote (implicit & explicit)
2. In the book Fatal Forecast by Michael J. Tougias he writes, "Ernie's pay depended on the catch, and his cut of the boat's profits was slightly lower than those of the more senior men. When the catch was poor, all the crew suffered", (6). Michael is saying that Ernie, even though he is the oldest of the crew, has the least experience on the boat.
bread: Introduction to the quote meat: the quote bread: citation
ReplyDeleteIn the book, Fatal Forecast the author, Michael J. Tougias says, "He hitchhiked to Washington State, bought a bicycle, and pedaled south on a three-month odyssey. He didn't stop until he reached Mexico" (11). I think Micheal J. Tougias implies that people should try things that might be crazy like riding a bike to Mexico, because it would be a pretty good story to tell somebody.
Top bread: Leading to the quote.
ReplyDeleteMeat: The quote.
Bottum bread: Number of page were the quote was found.
Condiments: Meaning and theme of the quote.
According to Hendrick Ibsen, "You are just like the others. They all think i am incapable of anything really serious-" (10). The quote defines how Nora thinks she is being accused of being not capable of being serious. Nora says people say she is incapable of being serious.
Bread: the intro
ReplyDeleteMeat: your quote
Bread: page number
Condiments: Implicit witch is what the quote implies. excplit witch is word for word.
According to Michael J. Touglas, "The six-year-old, Twenty-seven-ton, green and white Fair Wind had proven itself in heavy seas on numerous trips" (16-17). This quote is stating that the boat has seen a lot of weather and up to the weather of gorges bank. This quote also implies that the sea is unpredictable.
The top piece of bread is the introduction to the quote, the meat is the quote itself, and the bottom piece of bread is the quote's citation. Finally the condiments summarize the quote and shows what it implies.
ReplyDeleteAccording to Henrik Ibsen, "When your husband was ill you came to meet borrow two hundred and fifty pounds"(22). Krogstad is reminding Nora of the time she went to him to borrow money. Krogstad is doing this so he can build up to the terms they agreed upon.
-The top piece of bread of the sandwich is an intro to the quote.
ReplyDelete-The meat of the sandwich is the quote itself.
- The condiments are the explicit and implicit.
-The bottom piece of bread is the citation.
According to Henrik Ibsen, "I can't hit upon anything that will do; everything I think of seems so silly and insignificant" (26).
1) The man in this quote Helmer is saying he can't think of anything or do anything without feeling bad about himself.
2) The quote implies that Helmer doesn't feel good about himself.
The bread is the introduction to the quote. the meat is the quote, the other bread is the citation, and the condiments are the explicit and implicit. According to Henrik Ibsen, "Only to see how you were, Mrs. Helmer. I have been thinking about you all day long. A mere cashier, a quill driver, a-well, a man like me-even he has a little of what is called feeling, you know" (43). This quote is saying how he is worried about Mrs. Helmer. It implies that he doesn't care about people often.
ReplyDelete- The bread of the sandwich is the introduction to the quote.
ReplyDelete- The meat is the quote.
- The condiments are the explicits and implicit.
- The bottom bread is the citation.
According to Henrick Ibsen "You haven't any idea how many expenses we skylarks and squirrels have, Torvald" (4). The quote is saying that Thorvald doesn't understand Nora. The quote is implying that Nora doesn't think her husband doesn't fully and her stand her and thats what her point of view is.
In a citation sandwich, the top bun is an introduction to the quote, the meat is the quote itself, the bottom bun is the page number, and the condiments are implicit and explicit sentence related to the text.
ReplyDeleteMichael J. Tougias states, "Billy Garnos remained calm and steady at the wheel when the ocean grew angry"(17). This quote states that Billy Garnos is a very calm and collected person under pressure. This quote implies that fisherman have to stay cool at the wheel in rough weather in order to get work done.
The bread is an intro, meat is the quote, bread is the citation, and the condiments are the word for word meaning (explicit) and the deeper more hidden meaning (implicit).
ReplyDeleteAfter getting a false forecast they head out to go numb some bugs towards a storm. According to Michael J. Tougias, "Billy Garnos, Ernie Hazard, Rob Thayer, and Dave Berry headed out to sea based on what they believed to be the same reliable forecast they had learned to trust over the years. They looked forward to a smooth trip. But on that November day the Fair Wind was on a collision course with a storm that produced waves more monstrous than the crew had ever seen" (9). This quote talks about how they are going straight for a storm, but it could also talk about how lost information can be lethal to people.
The bread is the introduction of the quote, meat is the quote, bread is citation, and the condiments are explicit which means word for word, and implicate is a deeper more hidden meaning. According to Micheal J. Tougias, "Every offshore boat aims to maximize its catch in as little time as possible"(12). The quote is saying boats try to catch the the most they can each trip. Boats never catch enough.
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ReplyDeleteThe bread is the part leading up to the quote. The condiments on the sandwich are the explicit quote and the implicit part is what the quote implies. The meat is the quote in its exact statement. The bottom bun is the page number.
According to Micheal J. Tougias,
"Crossing the lanes could be dangerous because of the amount of traffic that used them. A small boat like the 'Fairwinds' wouldn't stand a chance against a tanker of freighter
(19)."
Explicit: Crossing the lanes could be dangerous because of the amount of traffic that used them. A small boat like the 'Fairwinds' wouldn't stand a chance against a tanker of freighter."
Implicit: When you cross the shipping lanes it is dangerous because it would be much easier to get hit by a ship.